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ruthiestumpThe time when you first started writing fan fiction?
Oh geez, every time I think about my first story I cringe. I also cringe at my second story and my third and possibly my fourth but I'm getting off topic. Over the past 2 days, I have had the urge to go back to Quizilla and take some of the '7 minutes in heaven' bandom quizzes. I used to take them all the time when I was in the 8th and 9th grade before Myspace took over my life. Anyway, after satisfying my need to take the quizzes and reading the results, they were all really poorly written and really fucking sappy. That, my friends, was how my writing started out. Ahhh, the good ol' times when you made your favorite band member love you with no strings attached because you're the main character. (or however many strings you want attached. This is your fucking story, you write what ever the hell you want. You're the main character.)
ANYWAY, my writing style has developed so much from when I started, it's pretty shocking. I write at longer lengths and I include way more details.I also don't include myself in stories. I write slash now and very descriptive. Never thought I would actually do that. :)
I actually thought I would write more about the subject but I'm listening to My Chemical Romance live shows on youtube and it's kind of making my mind jump around with awesomeness so under the cut is one of my FIRST ever fan fiction attempt, misspelling and all. I am sorry. Second cut is the most recent.
Chapter 2:
Oh man, i heard a rumor that Patrick is going to break up with Vicky! I'M HAPPY!
but she's my best friend, and she looks depressed. She's trying to spend more time with him. Hopefully they stay together, cuz the 1st rule is NEVER DATE YOUR BEST FRIEND'S BOYFRIEND!!!!! I can't even ake up my mind! I wat him to be with me but ..... i want him to be with vicky. WHY DOES PATRICK HAVE TO BE SO DAMN CUTE!!!!! I just hope Ashleedoesn't tell Vicky... That could ruin our friendship. Ashlee knows i hate her and i know she hates me. Yea, i know i told Pete she was a She-devil when she was in the other roomand she spread a nasty rumor that i was sleeping with dirty. I just hope she doesn't tell Vicky. Let Ashlee be classy for once!!!!
Chapter 3:
I can't belive it, Patrick broke up with her!
snice i'm is best friend that's a girl i decided to ask him why. "Vickey changed over the couple of months, and i had my eyes on someone else for a while." I asked who, but he didn't reply. I tols Vicky. She was crying whe i told her. She said " I knew he liked someone!" I didn't tell her that he said that she was taken, that'll make her cry eve more and then she won't be able to do the show! I told her to get ready. I went back to my tour bus, when i opened the door Zac was there ! I was surprised cuz Zac is supposed to be with his HSM tour. "Zac, what are you doing here?" i asked as i hugged him. "Like 3 shows cancelled out of nowhere so i can spend time with you!" He said. uh-oh, "That's great," I said. "Now you can come back stage with me!" It just slipped out. "Sure, let's go!" We were holding hands wehne we got backstage. Ryan saw us and yelled "Hey , What would dirty say?" he said while running to start the show. "What would Ashlee say when she finds out you like her!" i yelled back. Ryan turned around to face me and fell flat on his face! 
. We kept on walking. I introduced him to the guys in Panic! and in CS (cobra starship). Vicky likes Zac! YAY! Now, off to patrick. *GULP*
Heaven To Hell:
Mikey, the sweet boy she was talking to downstairs at the party, Gerard's little brother, the guy she was innocently trying to flirt with, is going to rape her. The feel of Mikey's denim jeans felt horrible on Katie's bare legs and she clenched her eyes tight as she felt Mikey kiss her lips again. Katie's lips were pressed together tightly as Mikey continued to kiss her. Mikey stopped after a few minutes when he noticed she wasn't kissing back. He let out an aggravated sigh as he lifted himself off of her. Feeling the weight on her chest disappear, Katie opened her mouth for a gasp of air and a loud sob escaped.
"Please Mikey, don't this." Katie pleaded. She opened her eyes and lifted her head to see Mikey at the base of his bed. The room was dark, the lamp on Mikey's drawer displayed strips of light in the room. Katie could make out Mikey working on the buttons on his jeans. Once Mikey zipped down his fly, Katie's eyes became blurry again and a sudden strike of pain spread through her head. Her head flopped back onto the bed, not handling her horrible headache. The pain in her head took over, her senses not intact. She almost didn't feel Mikey's hand go up her skirt, ripping off her underwear and opening her legs.
Oh geez, every time I think about my first story I cringe. I also cringe at my second story and my third and possibly my fourth but I'm getting off topic. Over the past 2 days, I have had the urge to go back to Quizilla and take some of the '7 minutes in heaven' bandom quizzes. I used to take them all the time when I was in the 8th and 9th grade before Myspace took over my life. Anyway, after satisfying my need to take the quizzes and reading the results, they were all really poorly written and really fucking sappy. That, my friends, was how my writing started out. Ahhh, the good ol' times when you made your favorite band member love you with no strings attached because you're the main character. (or however many strings you want attached. This is your fucking story, you write what ever the hell you want. You're the main character.)
ANYWAY, my writing style has developed so much from when I started, it's pretty shocking. I write at longer lengths and I include way more details.
I actually thought I would write more about the subject but I'm listening to My Chemical Romance live shows on youtube and it's kind of making my mind jump around with awesomeness so under the cut is one of my FIRST ever fan fiction attempt, misspelling and all. I am sorry. Second cut is the most recent.
Chapter 2:
Oh man, i heard a rumor that Patrick is going to break up with Vicky! I'M HAPPY!
but she's my best friend, and she looks depressed. She's trying to spend more time with him. Hopefully they stay together, cuz the 1st rule is NEVER DATE YOUR BEST FRIEND'S BOYFRIEND!!!!! I can't even ake up my mind! I wat him to be with me but ..... i want him to be with vicky. WHY DOES PATRICK HAVE TO BE SO DAMN CUTE!!!!! I just hope Ashleedoesn't tell Vicky... That could ruin our friendship. Ashlee knows i hate her and i know she hates me. Yea, i know i told Pete she was a She-devil when she was in the other roomand she spread a nasty rumor that i was sleeping with dirty. I just hope she doesn't tell Vicky. Let Ashlee be classy for once!!!!Chapter 3:
I can't belive it, Patrick broke up with her!
snice i'm is best friend that's a girl i decided to ask him why. "Vickey changed over the couple of months, and i had my eyes on someone else for a while." I asked who, but he didn't reply. I tols Vicky. She was crying whe i told her. She said " I knew he liked someone!" I didn't tell her that he said that she was taken, that'll make her cry eve more and then she won't be able to do the show! I told her to get ready. I went back to my tour bus, when i opened the door Zac was there ! I was surprised cuz Zac is supposed to be with his HSM tour. "Zac, what are you doing here?" i asked as i hugged him. "Like 3 shows cancelled out of nowhere so i can spend time with you!" He said. uh-oh, "That's great," I said. "Now you can come back stage with me!" It just slipped out. "Sure, let's go!" We were holding hands wehne we got backstage. Ryan saw us and yelled "Hey , What would dirty say?" he said while running to start the show. "What would Ashlee say when she finds out you like her!" i yelled back. Ryan turned around to face me and fell flat on his face! . We kept on walking. I introduced him to the guys in Panic! and in CS (cobra starship). Vicky likes Zac! YAY! Now, off to patrick. *GULP*Heaven To Hell:
Mikey, the sweet boy she was talking to downstairs at the party, Gerard's little brother, the guy she was innocently trying to flirt with, is going to rape her. The feel of Mikey's denim jeans felt horrible on Katie's bare legs and she clenched her eyes tight as she felt Mikey kiss her lips again. Katie's lips were pressed together tightly as Mikey continued to kiss her. Mikey stopped after a few minutes when he noticed she wasn't kissing back. He let out an aggravated sigh as he lifted himself off of her. Feeling the weight on her chest disappear, Katie opened her mouth for a gasp of air and a loud sob escaped.
"Please Mikey, don't this." Katie pleaded. She opened her eyes and lifted her head to see Mikey at the base of his bed. The room was dark, the lamp on Mikey's drawer displayed strips of light in the room. Katie could make out Mikey working on the buttons on his jeans. Once Mikey zipped down his fly, Katie's eyes became blurry again and a sudden strike of pain spread through her head. Her head flopped back onto the bed, not handling her horrible headache. The pain in her head took over, her senses not intact. She almost didn't feel Mikey's hand go up her skirt, ripping off her underwear and opening her legs.
